Her Gossamer Hair – Tanka – February 17, 2015

I wrote a haiku yesterday as part of the Writing 201: Poetry course that is being held over the next two weeks. The subject matter being water and I took a photo for this. The photo was spotted from a poet and writer I most admire who asked if they could use said photo, of course I said yes. Here is the poem attached to my photo, and wow what a poem. Now the odd thing is today, I write a poem about flying, well if you read this poem here, then mine today the subject matters are eerily almost making a story of their own.

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Writing 201: Water

her gossamer hair
flowing like algae tendrils
in murky water
the pilot looked through Perspex
dream’s illusions ebbed and flowed

© G.s.k. ‘15

Yesterday I read Justine’s from Eclectic Odds n Sods,  first effort for Poetry 201 which was also her response to the Phoneography and Non-SLR Digital Devices Photo Challenge.  The subject of the first poetry class was water and she wrote this great haiku:

Liquid breath cloaks me
Clouds of steam dust the perspex
Fingertips tell tales

© Justine Nagaur

The photograph fascinated me and called to my muse … so I asked her if I could use her photo for a “darkish” tanka … and she said yes, so here we are, with my sincerest thanks!!!

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  3 comments for “Her Gossamer Hair – Tanka – February 17, 2015

  1. February 17, 2015 at 7:17 PM

    The prefect image for your poem. Beautifully fluid!

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  2. February 18, 2015 at 1:23 AM

    I thought I had commented here …well done, my dear a tanka and a haiku…well done and that photo is amazing I noticed again last night on Georgia’s blog:) Bravo, kiddo!! xx

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    • February 18, 2015 at 1:27 PM

      thank you 🙂 She seemed to like it and i was more happy that it inspired her muse which is quite special hehe x

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