Writing 201: Fingers of Gold

Writing 201: Fingers

Writing 201: Fingers

Writing 201: Fingers © Justiine Nagaur

 Fingers of Gold

 Slippery fingertips sensually sealed with the essence of sandalwood and orange oils, coated on digits slide softly exploring soft pale skin.  

Senses are serene as hands sweep up fanning either side of supple spine, arching over shoulders in motion like Sacred Kingfisher gliding over shimmering Serpentine finding his way home.

Tips sink softly in to slick skin feeling each stiff muscle holding secrets of the soul, slithering and stretching each sinew to let sail each moment of strife.

Serene sensations seal within seducing soulful nature to spring forth after sleepy slumber, a smile slips upon silken lips housed now in spiritual splendour.

© Justine Nagaur

I used to be a holistic therapist, I suppose once one, always one, but I don’t practise on clients anymore, this brought back fond memories.

Your feedback is always welcomed, Justine xx

Your prompt: fingers

Today’s form: prose poetry

Today’s device: assonance

Luciles Photo Rehab: 101

  35 comments for “Writing 201: Fingers of Gold

  1. February 24, 2015 at 7:47 PM

    Stunning picture and sensuous words. Well done Justine!

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  2. February 24, 2015 at 7:59 PM

    The line “like Sacred Kingfisher gliding over shimmering Serpentine finding his way home” is glorious, I love the whole thing 🙂

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    • February 24, 2015 at 8:08 PM

      awe thank you and yes coming from you is a huge compliment as you write so sensually yourself, thank you 😉 big smile x

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  3. February 24, 2015 at 8:22 PM

    Well done my dear!! your words just roll off the tongue so sensually. I have a hunch our friend https://scottishmomus.wordpress.com/ would love this too:) She was my very first WP friend two years ago actually. Let her have a peak at this gem, Justine:)

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    • February 24, 2015 at 8:34 PM

      thank you and what lovely poetry she writes too!!! A great inspiration to start your blogging life with x

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  4. February 24, 2015 at 8:40 PM

    Oh very nice, I totally need a massage. I think it’s all the s sounds in there that make it super sssssssensual. X

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  5. Jen
    February 24, 2015 at 8:51 PM

    Oh, very sensual! I liked the Sacred Kingfisher too —
    Have been wanting to go for a massage for some time now — now I *really* want one!!!!

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  6. February 24, 2015 at 10:17 PM

    How positively sensuous and soothing! Even before reading your poetry challenge for today I was thinking – and feeling – how well you used the technique throughout. This truly slithers along all the curves and delights in it. The course looks all the more attractive now. 🙂

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  7. February 24, 2015 at 10:25 PM

    This made me sleepy. The relaxed sleepy, not the bored sleepy. 🙂

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  8. artseafartsea
    February 25, 2015 at 12:53 AM

    Lovely poem/prose. Beautiful sounds. Brought back some memories of when I was into all things holistic.

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    • February 26, 2015 at 2:42 PM

      awe thank you. I miss being a holistic therapist. Did you practise or were you a client? x

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      • artseafartsea
        February 26, 2015 at 6:41 PM

        I was a client but thought about learning more about it.

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  9. February 25, 2015 at 5:33 AM

    Beautiful, Justine. Words and photo.

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    • February 26, 2015 at 2:40 PM

      Thank you Sammy, you might like my drawers one! hehe x

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  10. February 25, 2015 at 2:28 PM

    Beautiful and sensual…so vivid……..

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    • February 26, 2015 at 2:37 PM

      Thank you, i took myself to the moment which was really lovely. How are you getting on?x

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      • February 27, 2015 at 9:40 AM

        It really did show i your writing…. Me going to be off for sometime..traveling etc , so won’t be able to continue with the writing201 which is sad 😦

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        • February 28, 2015 at 8:48 AM

          It finished yesterday so don’t worry i made sure i followed you so we can keep in touch. Good luck with the travels x

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  11. February 25, 2015 at 7:59 PM

    As everyone else says: sensual. Very! 😉

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